Thursday, January 31, 2008

Corrected Speech

I wrote another poem.
It's been awhile.
I wrote it last night at about 10:30.
I thought about not posting it. I still am. This might only be a draft. I think I want to though.
I hope you like it.
E-mail me your comments, or IM me.
Here ya' go:

She promised me in April.
She promised never again.

She breaks her promise.

In January, she's close to breaking.
I say, "Maria, please don't," in despair.

She doesn't.

She made a promise to him.
And she wants to keep this one.

How can she keep a promise tto him,
When she could not keep her word to me?

Her words kill me.

I wither in pain.
I know what to do.

I run and hide.
And go to sleep.

And my eyes start to build.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

it's good.

Anonymous said...

ahh
meggers


i'll bring the hersheys

Anonymous said...

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thanks megan.

Molly said...

i can't think of anything to make it better!

Anonymous said...

does anyone else here even understand what this means?