I don't write forever and then write two new posts in one day.
But I wanted to show off my prologue. I want comments. It has to be the best prologue I've ever written!
I mean it.
But, I need to show it off.
Here's the preview, to my new project. ^^
I am nothing like my sisters.
I am not beautiful,
I am not popular,
I am not talented,
And do not get any guy I want.
I am nothing like my sisters.
I am not the prom queen,
I do not get love letters,
I do not have a boyfriend,
And the only thing I can do right, is write.
I am nothing like my sisters.
Especially here.
With Cameron,
And Amy,
And my new life.
I am nothing like my sisters,
And that is the way it should be.
4 comments:
That is most definitely the best prologue you've ever written! I think the rythm is perfect, the words are beautiful, the repition is good, and there is just the right thing. But... you know me. I have to critisize something. The last line: "and that is the way it should be" could be problematic if your character is going to hate being different later on in the book. That being said, i think ending on "I am nothing like my sisters" would be great because it would tie the beginning and end together.
*repetition
i really like it! :)
thats incredible
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